REZULTATI – MALI IRISOV NATJEČAJ ZA HAIKU I SENRJU, 2022.

REZULTATI – MALI IRISOV NATJEČAJ ZA HAIKU I SENRJU, 2022.

THE RESULTS OF A LITTLE IRIS HAIKU CONTEST FOR HAIKU AND SENRYU IN CROATIAN, 2022

Tema: Nafta

Theme: Crude : nafta

Sudila/Judged by: Đurđa Vukelić Rožić

U Ivanić-Gradu, 17. 3. 2023.

 

H A I K U

 

Prva nagrada/First Prize: Danijela Grbelja

ruža vjetrova –
sve su oči uprte
u naftnu mrlju

the wind rose –
all eyes watching
the oil slick

 

Druga nagrada/Second Prize: Sanela Pliško

božićno jutro
s obale lopatam
sirovu naftu

Christmas morning
shoveling crude oil
off the shore   (prijevod autoričin)

 

Druga nagrada/Second Prize: Sonja Kokotović

nestanak plina
ličke čarape nisu
više souvenir

gas los
wool socks
not a souvenir any more

 

Treća nagrada / Third Prize: Marija Petrek

Smrznuto gorivo
Susjed pali auto
Na guranac

Frozen fuel
The push power starts
My neighbor’s car

 

Treća nagrada/Third Prize: Štefica Vanjek

dječje stope
na livadi prekrile
naftne mrlje

in the meadow
children’s footsteps covered
with oil spill

 

S E N R J U / S E N R Y U 

NAGRADE/EQUAL AWARDS

Gordana Vlašić

boje vatrometa
pod naftnom mrljom
ribe plivaju leđno

the colors of firework –
under the oil slick
fish swiming backstroke

 

Silva Trstenjak

energetska kriza
gužva u trgovini
s biciklima

energetic crisis
crowd
in the bicycle shop

 

Nina Kovačić

džip kraj puta…
s kanistrom stopira
zaprežna kola

jeep by the road
with canister driver hitchhikes
a horse cart

 

Franjo Ordanić

zadnje kapi –
do iduće benzinske
vozim na molitvu

last drops –
to the next gas station
driving on my prayer
(Prevela Martina Mirt-Ordanić)

 

 Anica Lukina

rast cijena
bijeli kruh obojilo
crno zlato

growing prices
black gold coloring
a white bread

 

Slavica Sarkotić, Lekenik

crna mrlja
evolulira na pučini –
predator br. 1

a black spill
evoluates in the open sea –
predator No. 1

 

POHVALE/HONORABLE MENTIONS FOR HAIKU AND SENRYU

 Vesna Andrejić Mišković

spuštam pogled –
u naftnoj bušotini
potonulo sunce

lowering my gaze –
in the oil drill
sunken sun

 

Nada Jačmenica

eksplozija –
zemlja iskašljala
naftu 

an explosion –
earth coughs up
oil

 

Anđelka Korčulanić

Razotkriveni snovi
pradavne šume
na svjetlu dana

unveiled dreams
of ancient woods
in daylight

 

Aleksandar Košeto

ne znam je li
blagoslov ili kletva –
nafta

I don’t know
a blessing or a curse –
black oil

 

Franjo Ordanić (kajkavsko narječje)

hračkam i kunem –
benzin z kanistera
ravne v grle

spit and curse –
fresh from gas canister
into my throat
(Prevela Martina Mirt-Ordanić)

 

Liljana Dobra
naftni izvor
nedaleko u selu
gladan prosjak

the oil source
in the village near by
a hungry beggar

 

Zrinko Šimunić, Zagreb

crno zlato:
metafora
ili oskimoron?

black gold:
a metaphor
or an oxymoron?

 

Katarina Zadrija

skliske mrlje
moj auto ostavlja trag
pratiteljima

slippery stains
my car leaves a trail
to my followers

 

Silva Trstenjak

pištolj u ruci:
euri se okreću brže
od litri goriva

the petrol gun
Euros turn around faster
than the fuel

 

Vilma Knežević

prijetnja luci
usidren tanker
miriše po nafti

a threat to the port
an anchored tanker
with the smell of oil

 

Grozdana Drašković

novo poskupljenje
na benzinskoj postaji
psovke zbog rata

rising prices
on the gas station –
cursing to war

 

Melita Gruber
kolonu na cesti
guši miris benzina –
svi na more

car queue
choked by gas smell
everybody goes to the sea

 

Željko Vojković

izglancano auto
iz auspuha izlazi
crni dim

polished car
black smoke comes out
from the air exhauster

 

Dimitrij Škrk

both on the mooring
the ship
and the rainbow around it

zajedno na vezu
brod
i duga oko njega

 

Đurđica Gospočić

sjela mirovina
moj stari dizelaš
opet u formi

retirement check
my old oil car
back in shape

 

Aljoša Vuković

ptice selice –
nafta na krilima
izbjegla carinu

migratory birds –
oil on their wings
avoids the customs